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   This is my first xreader so it may not be perfect okay ;w;
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GemanyxTomboy!Reader: Secret Crush

"Come on (y/n) it's time to get up!"

"Ugh fine"

With that a sleepy yet angry (y/n) got up from bed. Today was the day (y/n) was going to a new school ever since the "accident" that happened to her family months ago. As usual (y/n) got up and put on some jeans, a T-shirt, and whichever shoes she found lying on the ground. Her hair was a beautiful shade of (h/c) and had sparkling (e/c) eyes. Even though (y/n) looked like a harmless, nice girl, she was the complete opposite ,and usually dressed and acted like a guy. 

"(y/n)! come on already your breakfast is getting cold!"

"Coming mom!"

~Time Skip~
It was 8:00 and so you began to walk through your new school. You have already been given your assigned classes so you just decided to walk around for a bit. You kept wandering until you found yourself on the football field.  

"Huh? when did I get here?"

You looked around and realized you weren't alone. Far on the end side of the field were four people. One had long blonde hair, another had brown hair and tan skin, and the third looked pale with grayish hair. You squinted to get a closer look at the fourth one but all you could see was a tall blonde dude with an annoyed expression. You didn't realize it but the tall blonde was looking at you. He looked rather confused and you were guessing it was because of what you were wearing. You didn't break away from the staring contest because unlike other girls, you had strength and guts.That was until you heard a bell ring throughout the school. You looked around for a bit then realized all of the four guys were leaving-probably going to class.

"I guess I should be going to my class too"

And so you were headed to your new classroom and opened the door as loudly as you could. At first everyone looked at you until the teacher spoke up.

"Ahh, you must be the new student. Please introduce yourself"

You marched up to the front of the class and just threw your backpack on the ground.

"What's up, my name is (y/n) and that's about it"

You grabbed your backpack and sat in a random seat with an intimidating look in your eyes.

"................umm well welcome to our school (y/n)" said the teacher forcing a smile.

For the entire day everyone ignored you. To you, this was normal and you liked it that way. It wasn't long until you realized that the tall blonde was actually named Ludwig, and he was in some of your classes. Out of all the students though, Ludwig wasn't afraid of you, he would talk to you occasionally about homework or other people. Its been like this for months and you grew fond of Ludwig and would always try to find something to talk about when you were with him.

"Hey Ludwig!"

"Hmm? oh, what is it (y/n)?"

Ludwig began to notice that you were fidgeting.

"Ummm, well, I was wondering if you would like to i don't know, maybe watch a movie together sometime?"

"Oh, umm I'm sorry but i have plans this week with my brother"

Ludwig walked off without saying anything else. You turned around and began walking back to class. It may not have looked like it, but inside a small piece was broken in (y/n)'s heart. As tough as she was, (y/n) knew when she began to like someone. You walked down the hall right passed the 'popular' girls giggling about something. They stayed quiet once you were walking through but you knew they were snickering and making fun of you. Normally you would've shown them their place, but right now you just needed some alone time. After that inccident, you noticed Ludwig began to ignore you more and more. You didnt understand why but he seemed flustered.

"*sigh* Well another boring day gone by" you began opening your locker until a peice of paper fell out.

"Huh? what's this?"

You picked up the paper and began to read it.

    Dear (y/n),
I'm sorry that I've been ignoring you these past days, but it's only because was too shy to confront you. I bet your laughing right now thinking i'm so weak, and i guess it is true. It's just that, I really like you.... no, it's more than that. I hope this doen't come between us (y/n), but ever since I first layed eyes on you, I felt a spark. And thats why I would like to say....   
                                        ich liebe dich (y/n)


Your heart stopped, did he really mean that?


"(y/n)"

you turned around only to face shining blue eyes.

"Ludwig..."

There were tears at the corners of your eyes.

"Ludwig!"

You glomped Ludwig and began to cry a bit.

"I love you too"
(insert dramatic kissing scene)

~~~~~~Extended Ending~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Oy, amigo, I think your little brother has a new girlfriend"

"WHAT!? how can he have one before the awesome me!?"

"Ohonhonhon, I smell jealously"


This is for TheFinalMarch Im your Secret Hetalia Valentine :D
sorry if it sucks its my first time writing something ;w;
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:icondragonficz:
dragonficz Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
statis report gilbert: ur not as macho as ludwig, and never will be ( i mean luddy trains every day! all u do is drink! )
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KorraLover10 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
(ADD DRAMATIC KISSING SCENE!) Ha! IKR?! Whenever I try to write rom kissing parts, it's either too simple or WAY too cheesy/dramatic!
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TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The struggle is real xD 
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:icongermanyfan123321:
Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
Love this! And that ending was funny xD
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!~ >w<
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:icongermanyfan123321:
Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
Ha no problem~!
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:iconpockeydocterchu:
pockeydocterchu Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. A lot. :D
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome!~ :la: and thanks :D
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:iconfairytail4322:
FairyTail4322 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD The BTT always gas to make the saddest  story funny or any story for that matter
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:iconwinter-waltz:
Winter-Waltz Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
That ending...
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:iconmow-face:
Mow-face Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD that ending tho...
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
what's a story without them xD
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:iconwayoftheninjaftw:
WayOfTheNinjaFTW Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my god it's so adorable!! <3
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you >u<
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:iconwayoftheninjaftw:
WayOfTheNinjaFTW Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehe <3 ur welcome~
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:iconprussiaskitten:
PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome
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:iconcrystalcritic:
CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Manami: I agree with France-chan~!
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ColourTraveller Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student General Artist
ohonhonhon~!! Marvelous~!!France (I'm awesome because...) [V2] 
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ;P
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:iconpandabunny0123:
pandabunny0123 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Onhonhonhon~ >:3
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD :iconpervyfranceplz:
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ChocolateBookworm77 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very well done! I like how you made the reader tough, while usually you kind of wimpy readers in these. Excellent job! Especially for a first time :congrats: 
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyuiwahplz: thank you so much! i tried my best to make the reader more of a tomboy than regular girls :iconahehplz:
thank u for reading! :iconyuiglompplz:
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:iconchocolatebookworm77:
ChocolateBookworm77 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
 You're welcome!Caramel dansen emote
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:iconthe-tomatoboss:
the-TomatoBoss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student General Artist
WAITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT... THIS IS YOUR FIRST TIME WRITING SOMETHING???????? THIS DOESN'T MAKE ANY OF THE SENSES TO ME.



LOL Sucks to suck Gilbert~~~
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
is it that hard to believe? XD
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:iconthe-tomatoboss:
the-TomatoBoss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Yes really 
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well its true XD
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:iconthe-tomatoboss:
the-TomatoBoss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student General Artist
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU. LEIK, ARE YOU EVEN HUMAN??? LEIK, SERIOUSLYYYYY~~~ ((omg I feel like Poland....))
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this WAS my first time writing an x reader >w<
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:iconthe-tomatoboss:
the-TomatoBoss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student General Artist
It's so good ^^~
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :3
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109144 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehehe~ Too bad, Gilbert.
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:iconyumekoi-hoshi:
Yumekoi-Hoshi Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student
So cute Blush
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:iconhetalia1775:
Hetalia1775 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Cute. :)
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ty :3
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:iconjaxaugust:
JaxAugust Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS ADORABLE! :iconsqueeeeplz:

Reader-chan is just precious! XDD
Pretty good for your first reader-insert! :icongreatjobplz:
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank u so much :iconhappytearsplz: im glad u liked it ;w;
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:iconjaxaugust:
JaxAugust Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course! Keep it up, muh friend! ^7^
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^w^
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:iconleifisaunicorn:
LeifIsAUnicorn Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know why but I think the extended ending is the best part XD
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i thought it would be a perfect touch XD
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Warriorcatgrl99 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   General Artist

HGJUDCHGDS

I LOVE IT

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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
im glad u think so :iconhappytearsplz:
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Warriorcatgrl99 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   General Artist
It's wonderful ^^ Keep on writing and you'll get even better, and don't forget to read more reader inserts too XDDD Those should help
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yup and dont worry i read plenty XD
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TheFinalMarch Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omG i love it so much!
it's so cute i just can't handle it

Thank you so much!!!
:happybounce: 
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:icontheshadowgirls:
TheShadowgirls Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yw im glad u like it ;w;
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